- Concisely presents argument in one sentence
- Must address significance, relevance, and impact of the document
Thursday, March 19, 2015
Qtr. 1 Essay Thesis Statement
Identify which source you are analyzing (ex. UDHR, UNDCI, or UNMDGs). Post your thesis statement as a comment to this post.
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An analysis of the eight millenium development goals for 2015 reveals two goals that need extra attention: combat HIV/AIDS, malaria and other diseases, and ensure environmental sustainability.
ReplyDeleteWhy address these 2 goals in particular? Who (i.e. groups or countries) does this impact? Have the MDG's been successful?
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ReplyDeleteThe United Nations set forth various development goals for this millennium in order to empower and support modern issues such as gender equality and maternal health education.
On the right track... Who/where is under consideration? What is your position?
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ReplyDeleteCombat HIV/AIDS and gender equalities are examples of the 8 goals set by the United Nations for this millennium.
ReplyDeleteCheck grammar... What is your position? Who does this impact? Why is this important?
DeleteDespite the want or needs of the colonial powers or the colonized areas, the United Nations insists on the self-government of all territories.
ReplyDeleteExplicitly identify the document under consideration. What is your position on this issue? Where (i.e. - what countries or groups) are you considering?
DeleteThere are eight main goals to be completed by the end of the millenium and two that need to be addressed are eradicating extreme poverty and hunger, and ensuring environmental sustainability.
ReplyDeleteWho do the MDGs impact? Why do these two goals need to be addressed? Have they been successful?
DeleteThere are eight millennium development goals that are to be reached by 2015, two that need to be focused on are promote gender equality and empower women, and reduce child mortality.
ReplyDeleteWhy focus on these MDGs? What is your position? Where are you considering?
DeleteOf the eight goals of the millennium the two that need to be expanded on are combating HIV/AIDS, Malaria, and other diseases, and eradicating extreme poverty and hunger.
ReplyDeleteWhy? Who is impacted by these issues? What is the significance? Have the other 8 goals been achieved? What is your position?
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ReplyDeleteWith the upcoming end of the allotted time made for the completion of the millennium development goals, both the "Combat HIV/AIDS, Malaria and other diseases" and "Ensure Environmental Stability" goals need to be reviewed to track forwards and backwards progression.
ReplyDeleteOn the right track. Why do these goals need to be addressed? Who do they impact? What do you mean by "forwards and backwards progression"?
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ReplyDeleteThe General Assembly created the Universal Declaration of Human Rights to protect every humans' rights under law, which include freedom and equality and the right to life.
This is a statement of fact rather than an argument. Has the UDHR been evenly applied? Was it successful? What specific articles will you address in your argument?
DeleteThe Declaration on the Granting of Independence to Colonial Countries and Peoples had varying impacts because there were contrasting results based on the struggles and discrepancies of governments; the significance in this is that major powers and previous colonizers showed that they supported decolonization; finally, it is still relevant because of issues that newer countries still face because of decolonization.
ReplyDeleteYou've clarified your topic and position but need to work on grammar.
DeleteYou've clarified your topic and position but need to work on grammar.
DeleteThe importance of the declaration of decolonization was the signification that international communities were now aware and supportive of colonial states and its people. It relates directly to culture by integration the desire for freedom within people , and establishing basic human rights. It had a profound impact on society as it laid the foundation that all people have the right to pursue their economic , social , and cultural development.
ReplyDeleteThesis = one sentence. Specify the name of the document. Specify which people are impacted by this document
DeleteThe Universal Declaration of Human Rights was both significant and relevant in the time at which it was published, but was not extremely impactful in stopping human rights violations throughout the world.
ReplyDeleteOn the right track... Specify which parts of the world are under consideration. Also, are you looking at the current implementation of the UDHR?
DeleteThe Universal Declaration of Human Rights was established on December 10, 1948 proclaiming in article four that people have a right to be free, however there is still an endemnic problem amongst the world with slavery, also the declaration proclaimed in article 9 that “no one shall be subjected to arbitrary arrest, detention, or exhile” however this is still a world wide problem, concluding that the declaration is inactive.
ReplyDeleteWhat is the contemporary impact of this document? What is your position? Also, work on grammar...
DeleteThe Millenium Development Goals to reduce extreme poverty and increase maternal health encourage those who are able to help others in Africa become healthier, gain the ability to work, and help save the lives of those affected today.
ReplyDeleteGood! Identify "those who are able"
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ReplyDeleteThe United Nations presented their Millennium Development Goals for 2015, and the two that need the most attention are eradicating extreme hunger and poverty and combat against HIV/Aids, malaria, and other diseases.
Why? Specify your position/argument. Who is impacted by these issues?
DeleteThe Declaration of Human Rights written by the United Nations states that every human is equal and that they should not be judged or discriminated based on their race, their religious views, or their gender, however in history there are multiple cases where humans were exploited because of differences in these qualities, which proves that discrimination and judgments only leads to the destruction proven in history.
ReplyDeleteOn the right track... Clarify where/when.
DeleteTwo of the most important U.N millenium goals, ensuring environmental stability and to combat HIV/AIDS and Malaria, have been either met or exceeded, and the world now reaps the benefits of these incredible achievements.
ReplyDeleteSpecify what part of the world you are considering.
DeleteThe Universal Declaration of Human Rights has made significant impacts within the world, but some of these statements are disregarded, specifically articles one and four, creating inequality, the feeling of superiority, and the cruel treatment of other human beings.
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